Thursday, 31 March 2011

Thursday 31st March

Today I was away on a University Convention Trip, But Alex made some changes to the video to make sure that the audience understood what is going on.

Here she has put the screaming of Me and Shasta at the beginning where she wakes up, as though waking up from the screams...


I think the plot is now so much easier to understand as Alex can be woken up from the screams and remembers she has to start looking for them knowing that they have gone missing.

Here she has put added another layer of the Close up of Alex again to give a better effect of the awakening from the uunconsciousness...

Here she has put the Logo at the end. This makes people want to know what happens and now knowing the title of the film can give a better understanding of the story and how the title can be related to the characters "Stage Girls" knowing that the girls are performers and that they are being stalked (Aaron stalking them from behind the curtain and sniffing the scarf).

Here she has made the scene where she is running over the bridge and the piano overlay darker to give a more mysterious and dark atmosphere a sort of gloom and sadness that she has lost her friends...


 

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